The Great Weight of Ordeals

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We watch children mourn their futile endeavour as the tide engulfs their sandcastles. Ellie lies with me as the water laps at our feet and we find his ghost in the clouds. A seagull hangs in the breeze. We hold hands and wait for the tide to take us too.

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  1. Beautiful. Every word hits.

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  2. Oh wow, what a beautiful idea!

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  3. Beautiful!

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  4. […] is my attempt at a free-verse poem, based on The Great Weight of Ordeals. Is it terrible? Where am I going wrong? Again, I am genuine beginner with this, it’s the one […]

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