Alien

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Margaret doesn’t want George to come home, tail between legs. He knows that now. She wants him to find whatever it is he is looking for and come home so they can grow old together.

The Jubilee Line sways. George steels himself.

Onto the 486 and away from the dirty-white Dome, marooned at the tip of the peninsula like a half-buried alien craft; through Millennium Village, where dual carriageways divide bland housing estates serviced by vast retail parks. It is just after 9am and the streets are empty. No corner shops, no fruit stalls, no kids hurrying late to school, no leaning on horns. No hustle. It unnerves George, like he’s on a film set, victim of an elaborate hoax. Alien indeed. This is the last place Adam will be.

The more familiar, winding streets of Charlton follow. Victorian housing and Royal Artillery barracks. From the top deck, George can see into the courtyard as a group of 12 teenagers stand in two lines. They look a ragtag bunch in jeans and t-shirts and George thinks of his own father, whom he barely knew, standing in a similar courtyard, waiting for his mind to be torn apart.

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Every day in March I’m writing 200-word sections of flash fiction of an ongoing story based on a man’s search for his lost son on London’s buses.

1 – Welcome to London
2 – Thames
3 – Ghosts
4 – Escape
5 – Engage
6 – Shame
7 – Unrest

5 responses to “Alien”

  1. I haven’t been to London, but it’s also known as Millenium dome right? I read about it during my B.Arch. But didn’t pay much attention during the class😅 but I had almost same reaction when I saw it’s picture for the first time. It does look like an alien craft.

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    1. You’re right, it was originally called the Millennium Dome, but corporate branding has taken over and it’s now the O2 Arena. It’s a decent venue actually

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  3. Hey Ben, this rang a bell for me, but it reminded me more of the Olympic Village out in Stratford, which I quite like despite myself, but also resembles what I imagine London would look like after some sort of apocalypse, oddly deserted, but with something eerie hanging in the air. I half expected to see zombies running my way à la ’28 Days Later’, but I was mostly dodging cyclists.

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    1. Ha! Yeah, there are a few places in London which just seem totally disconnected to the rest of the city. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. It means a lot 🙂

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