The Man Who Leaves Early

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Losing again. He stands and shuffles, avoids eye-contact. A deserter avoiding the rush.

We can see you sneaking out!

Through the turnstile, he hears those left behind bellow their futile chants, demanding one final effort. He mutters at chances wasted, but as he steps onto the empty platform, from nowhere an errant pass, a clinical finish. A shocked, distant roar as resurgent hope tackles impossible odds.
Then, as he boards the train and the doors close behind him, last-gasp heroics and a collective ecstasy erupts into the night sky at a miracle complete.

He avoids the rush alright.

**

I’ll never understand why people leave games early.

7 responses to “The Man Who Leaves Early”

  1. Ha! I can barely turn the TV off early. So afraid I’ll miss any last heroics.

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    1. My eldest son and I saw our team score two goals in the last minute with 10 men to win 4-3 a few weeks ago and it was the perfect lesson for my boy ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Interesting story. Anand Bose from Kerala

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. i knew someone just like this man you described, and wondered the same thing too. I came to my conclusion after seeing him leave so many games, events, plays and concerts early just because he wanted to avoid the crowds rushing out. My conclusion was that he wanted to avoid closure in life, always keeping the ending open, no emotional strength to see the finale, either his team winning or losing, he did not have the stamina for the final leg home. And this was reflected in his life, always coming in to watch but never staying till the end when everyone celebrates or consoles one another, he has left before the best part of life happens. I like your reflection on life matters. I may got this all wrong but your words spoke as such to me. good writing that makes me think.

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    1. Thank you very much! It means so much to read your words. It’s an interesting theory. If I’m watching my team on the TV and they are losing, I have to turn the TV off just before the final whistle because I can’t handle the finality of it all, but if I’m there, I’m there until the very end. Brains are weird ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. HAHA! I know! and living in my own the weirdest place of all. You had a nice story there, I did enjoy it, happy you read my comment.

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