The Duel

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The reassuring aroma of freshly-cut grass and freshly-baked pies wafts across the ground. George watches on from square leg as the spinner stands at the end of his mark, tossing the ball from hand to hand, a reflex as natural as breathing, contemplating his next move. Slider, flipper, doosra, the choice is his.

At the other end, the batsman pulls up his collar as if to deflect the stream of abuse from behind the stumps. His parentage is questioned; his sexuality also. He shuts it out, eyes only on ball as it is delivered. It seems to gather menace in the air; floating, drifting and dipping before spitting off the pitch at an obscene angle. Unplayable. But he has survived. The bowlerโ€™s eyes narrow as the keeper tosses the ball back to him.

Another waddled run-up, this one drifts down leg, but itโ€™s quicker and the batsman is late on the sweep. No run, the batsman tied down. Something has to give.

The bowler pauses, plotting. The batsman inches forward, desperate to seize the initiative, but the bowler senses him coming and tosses the ball up higher, above his eye-line. The cherry-red ball, seam sharp and defined, drifts towards leg-stump and the batsman sees his chance. A flick of the wrists and the ball races to the boundary, only the ball does not skip over the rope and the crowd does not stand to applaud his century because he has been deceived in flight. The ball does not land where he expects, instead dipping spinning viscously off the dry pitch, missing everything but his stumps, which clatter sickeningly behind him.

The brilliant young batsman, utterly outfoxed by the veteran. The danger man out, done by an outstanding delivery, the bowler casting his wicked spell. England horrified. Australia overjoyed. George catches himself breathing a little faster. On such moments, on such duels, are series’ won and lost. This, this, is what Test cricket is all about.

The batsman does not slope back to the pavilion, rather strides with his head held high, unbowed, as the speakers around the ground optimistically announce the next man in and the crowdโ€™s despair turns to hope. Six feet of Lancastrian muscle steps out of the pavilion, brandishing his bat like a barbarian wielding an axe. A square-jawed comic-book hero, a man born to wear the weight of expectation of an entire nation, to thrive on crises. The Oval cheers. All will be well.

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This is an experiment to create narrative from a moment in a cricket match that hopefully appeals to those who donโ€™t even understand the game. Iโ€™ve tried to keep the flavour and idiosyncrasies of the sport without completely alienating non-believers in the hope that an idea I have had can sustain a longer, perhaps novella-length piece. Iโ€™ve read a couple of great American novels with baseball at their core and I think thereโ€™s the opportunity for a cricket-based novel. I will continue The Appointment tomorrow, I promise ๐Ÿ™‚

19 responses to “The Duel”

  1. Being from England I do understand cricket, and have played it in my time, so this brought back some memories in a very skilful way

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    1. Thank you Peter ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Cleverly delivered!

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  3. As an American with a limited knowledge of cricket (my friends brother played, and I met and spoke with the Indian national cricket team in 1998 – we stayed in the same hotel in Delhi), I enjoyed it.

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    1. Thank you. My planned story will be drenched in cricket without actually being about it. It’s about one man and his regrets.

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      1. I look forward to reading it. Good luck!

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      2. Thank you!

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  4. Mandie Hines

    It felt like I was at the game, watching it unfold. I think you may have missed your calling as a sports reporter.

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    1. Ha! I was one for 16 years! I quit in December.

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      1. Mandie Hines

        Haha This makes so much sense. I was a reporter myself for a while. Just working my way toward writing fiction.

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      2. We’re in very similar positions then ๐Ÿ™‚ we could be transatlantic writing buddies ๐Ÿ™‚

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      3. Mandie Hines

        Indeed. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. This is very evocative … I’ve sent down some unplayable balls in my time … I’ve written a lot of balls too!

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    1. Ha! Thanks Eric

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  6. I can’t stand cricket but this is very cleverly written and held my attention. Perhaps it was the Aussie win !

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    1. Thanks Wombat! It’s based on a moment from the 2005 Ashes ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. ๐Ÿ™‚ Wont say I recall it, so will believe you.

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  7. Nicely written. As a reader, I felt I was a part of the story.

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    1. Thank you very much, and thanks for reading ๐Ÿ™‚

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