The Start of The Fall

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Everyone remembers where they were when The Fall came. Evie was in a meeting about how to get fresh water to those in the city centre. Clive says he was fishing his sister out of the river. So I guess people had a clue that things were on the slide when the announcement came that Google was down, irrevocably.

We’d had no electricity for a week, but the history books will show the apocalypse began with the end of YouTube.

I do kind of miss it though. I didn’t really watch it, but it was nice to know it was there.

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101 words this one, and a bit more world building for this story, which is growing in my mind and I suspect I will get a chance to work on properly in 2018. Until then, I think a lot my flash fiction will be building on it in preparation 🙂

4 responses to “The Start of The Fall”

  1. Like how you hit exactly 100 words – even if at the expense of a ‘the’ in ‘with end of YouTube’ — perhaps I would change it to more of an announcement i.e, {with, ‘End of YouTube!’ }, if I have the punctuation correct… Just a suggestion from a rather inferior writer lol

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  2. Ha! No you’re absolutely right. That’s an error on my part. I spent about six weeks vehement in my determination to write exactly 50, 100, 200 and 500-word stories

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  3. Accidentally hit reply. But I have relaxed a little on that and I guess this one is 101. Thanks for pointing it out and nothing inferior about your writing 🙂

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