Missing Logan

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Fifteen minutes after turning out my light, Dad is back in my room. I simulate the breathing pattern of a sleeping child as he lies down next to me and puts his hand on my back. I don’t know where Dad’s darkness is, but he finds comfort in mine. He whispers I’m sorry, I’m sorry. I want to tell him he is my mushroom. When Mario collects a mushroom, he doubles in size and the world becomes much easier to complete. I don’t know how long he stays there because eventually his breathing grows heavy and then, so does mine.

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Our three-year-old is poorly so I didn’t have time to work on a brand new piece for today. Instead I have adapted this scene from The Last of Logan. I wrote here last night about my plans to turn this 3,000-word piece of experimental fiction into something more substantial. I feel like I’ve cheated today, but I do like this scene. Perhaps I’ll write two today or tomorrow, Calpol and snot permitting.

8 responses to “Missing Logan”

  1. ‘I want to tell him he is my mushroom. When Mario collects a mushroom, he doubles in size and the world becomes much easier to complete’
    So lovely, so heartbreaking that they’re both trapped in their own pain, only able to share with each other through silence and shared space.
    Lovely Ben. Such a strong story, this

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    1. Thank you so much! Got a big smile eating my Shreddies 🙂

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    2. And thank you for the Facebook like 🙂

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  2. You have a natural talent for story telling, leaving the reader wanting more.
    And I hope your kid feels better soon. 🙂

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    1. Wow, thank you! That’s lovely. And he’s fine today thank you 🙂

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      1. Oh good. Kids often are terribly sick and then bouncing round again 24 hours later! 🙂

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  3. This is a wonderful piece, and I hope your three-year-old is on the mend.

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    1. Wow, thank you 🙂 He’s fine now. Terrorising the household.

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